The Flute Player
I'm attracted to the Flute Player.
His hands captivate my attention
and steal my heart.
Just see how He holds His fingers
so gracefully.
Every move is sheer magic.
Look at the rings that decorate
His delicate fingers.
See His pinkie?
He held up the entire
Govardhan Hill with it!
The reddish tinge of His palms
fascinates my mind.
Just to see how He plays
on His flute enchants me.
I can't imagine what it would be like
to hear Him play.
Oh.... Krishna!
Navasi 2/23/08
May I suggest 2 cents?
PAMHO prabhuji,
Can you add rhyme to these lines and make them more poetic and musical?
Rhyme & Music
No, I can't Amarveda.
Perhaps you can do it....
: )
It's just not my style of writing. (or even how I want my writing to be).
Sorry : )
Navasi
Lovely description!
Dear Mataji,
PAMHO!
Your description bears testimony to the fact that you are so immersed in the beauty of the Lord that you can write an entire poem upon just His hand!
Your eternal servant,
Eternal Servant
Fascinating Krishna
Hare Krishna, Dear Eternal Muser,
Well.... you know.... when I look at Krishna's hands, I could just keep on looking, on and on....
I find His hands alone to be quite fascinating ..... what to speak of the rest of His amazing transcendental form. : )
But that's not anything to do with me, that's just the beauty and fascinating nature of Lord Krishna! : )
Thank your for your kind comment. :)
Love,
Navasi